Are all three of these sentences equally fine?
Are these all the same?
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The more we earn, the less careful we become about money.
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The more we earn, we become less careful about money.
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The more we earn, the less careful we are about money.
I am confused about the sentence structures used here. I feel the first one makes sense though.
I hope someone can help me understand the rule behind this!
Solution 1:
In a comment, FumbleFingers wrote:
Your #2 is completely "non-idiomatic", but the other 2 aren't so hot either, even though at least they both include the the more ... the less juxtaposition. The problem is you've switched from a verb with "more" to an adjective with "less", which rather messes up the "parallelism". Better would be to have a verb on both sides of the "equation", as in The more we earn, the less we care about money.