Do I need a comma in this sentence?
I'm not entirely sure I understand the exact question, but:
- "are these alcohol shakes or something else?"
If you capitalize the first letter of the sentence, it's perfectly fine. It does not need a comma.
"Are these alcohol shakes or something else?"
- "are these alcohol shakes, or is it something else?"
You can write it with or without a comma. Personally, I wouldn't use a comma. However, if this were dialogue in a play, for example, the comma might indicate that the speaker should pause briefly.
You must make the subject of the second thought agree with the first thought, however.
Are these (plural) ==> are they (plural)
You should also capitalize the first letter of the sentence.
"Are these alcohol shakes, or are they something else?"