Punctuation and listing two elements (when one of them is a list)
Wolf is a referee who provides scholarly peer review to the Israel Science Foundation and with the following journals:Journal of Public Economics, Journal of the Association of Environmental and Resource Economists, Journal of Environmental Economics and Management, Journal of Economic Behavior and Organization, The Energy Journal, American Journal of Agricultural Economics, Environmental and Resource Economics, Resource and Energy Economics, Energy Economics, Energy Policy, Canadian Journal of Economics, Journal of Economics, Southern Economic Journal, Ecological Economics, Journal of Public Economic Theory.
I want to rewrite the above sentence so that the Israel Science Foudation is placed at the end of the sentence. The objective of this rewriting is that Wolf's publications in journals has been more noteworthy than that with the Israel Science Foundation. The trouble is that the Israel Science Foundation is not a journal, otherwise I would have listed it after the colon and after American Journal of Agricultural Economics. The research I did includes New Hart's Rules but I have not found anything helpfull.
Is the following attempt correct: ?
Wolf is a referee who provides scholarly peer review to the following journals:Journal of Public Economics, Journal of the Association of Environmental and Resource Economists, Journal of Environmental Economics and Management, Journal of Economic Behavior and Organization, The Energy Journal, American Journal of Agricultural Economics, Environmental and Resource Economics, Resource and Energy Economics, Energy Economics, Energy Policy, Canadian Journal of Economics, Journal of Economics, Southern Economic Journal, Ecological Economics, Journal of Public Economic Theory.; as well as to the Israel Science Foundation.
How would you rewrite the sentence (preferably into one sentence)?
I noticed that many of the journal-type items have the word "journal" in them. Why not delete "journals" and just list all the things:
Wolf [is a referee who] provides scholarly peer review to Journal of Public Economics, Journal of the Association of Environmental and Resource Economists, Journal of Environmental Economics and Management, Journal of Economic Behavior and Organization, The Energy Journal, American Journal of Agricultural Economics, Environmental and Resource Economics, Resource and Energy Economics, Energy Economics, Energy Policy, Canadian Journal of Economics, Journal of Economics, Southern Economic Journal, Ecological Economics, Journal of Public Economic Theory, and the Israel Science Foundation.
If you need this long list of journal names to be once sentence, I think you'll have to rely on a bit of inference to not lose your reader. If I was reading the sentence for the first time, I think I would assume that all list items are journals while reading it, since many have "Journal" in the title. When I then encounter the last item, the Israeli Science Foundation, I would certainly recognize that as an organization that is not a journal.
Minor note: I put "is a referee who" in brackets, because I suspect it's redundant with "provides scholarly peer review". In other words, if providing scholarly peer review makes Wolf a referee, then "is a referee who" is dispensable.