Correctness of omitting a definite article or a preposition
I am writing an essay about my university experiences and a suggested correction from an English Ph.D. sounds wrong to me.
The suggestion is
In our meeting to discuss
thespring semester of my junior year, my adviser set forth a challenge.
She made a similar correction later,
One graduate course had been sufficient to consume my time
in thefall semester.
As a native English speaker, both of these corrections sound like grammatical errors to me, but I do not have the linguistic knowledge to articulate exactly what, if anything, makes them incorrect. (I spend much more time on math.se than english.se!)
Are her suggestions correct?
Solution 1:
Time periods can be used without articles. A different example:
One graduate course had been sufficient to consume my time last semester.
I personally find it awkward to use "fall semester" instead of "last semester" but it's the same basic idea.
Solution 2:
I think the corrections are technically correct, but they make the sentences awkward. Perhaps you could reach a compromise, such as:
In our meeting to discuss my junior year (plan), my adviser set forth a spring semester challenge.
and
One graduate course was sufficient to consume my fall semester.