Capitalization for a bullet list
The following is from some software documentation we are writing:
NOTE: Refreshing a report may be necessary or helpful when:
- you believe the data in the report has changed since it was last executed
- you'd like to return the report to its initial state/condition
My question is this. Should 'you' in the first bullet item and 'you'd' in the second bullet item be capitalized?
Solution 1:
It is a matter of style. Here are two options:
NOTE: Refreshing a report may be necessary or helpful when:
- You believe the data in the report has changed since it was last executed
- You'd like to return the report to its initial state/condition
NOTE: Refreshing a report may be necessary or helpful when:
- you believe the data in the report has changed since it was last executed;
- you'd like to return the report to its initial state/condition.
Create whatever rules you want for your software documentation and stick to them. As with all stylistic matters, consistency is key.
Solution 2:
Bullet point items should be capitalised if the item in question is a full sentence. Likewise, in that case they should also have a full stop.
Solution 3:
My opinion is that there are two possible cases.
- Bullets may be used as part of a sentence or paragraph, in which case regular capitalization and grammar rules apply.
- Bullets may be used as a sort of graphic communication (e.g. in a presentation) - in which case anything goes
For example, under case one, I might list
- an apple,
- a banana, and
- a grapefruit.
In this case, I am interjecting bullets into my sentence, but the sentence should remain readable. This becomes more useful with complex lists, which may refer to
- all fruit, except that which is
-
red,
-
green, or
-
yellow,
- including, but not limited to
- apples,
- pears, and
- bananas;
- including, but not limited to
-
- vegetables;
- meat; and
- legumes, unless
- it is the 30th of the month.
In this case, the above list is in fact a grammatical sentence, but the bulleting makes it easier to read, and as such the capitalization should maintain it's regular sentence-based form.
However, if I want to do something graphical in a document, or for a presentation, I say anything goes which effectively communicates. I might do this:
- Fruits
- NO: Red, Green, Yellow
- INCL. NO: Apples, Bananas, Grapefruits
- NO: Red, Green, Yellow
- Vegetables
- Meats
- Legumes (Except on the 30th of the Month)