How to say "I would like you to know..." but begin with "You, who I would like ..."? [closed]
I would like to say something like "You, who I would like you to know about this". But the second "you" seems wrong. What is the correct way to write this sentence?
Solution 1:
Let's take an example.
I would like you to know the truth. You are going to be shocked.
transforms to
You, who I would like to know the truth, are going to be shocked.
Note the absence of the second "you". Putting a second "you" is incorrect.
The sentence above is grammatically correct but it is horrible style, convoluted and confusing. Don't do it.