How is the readability of the "to be implemented" used in this sentence?
Thanks for your time, below sentence is a sales achievement written in the summary at the beginning of my resume:
...sealing the deals, settling the exclusive design architectures of the to be implemented two generations’ Wireless Presentation Gateway and led the projects to manage the products’ design, development, manufacturing, and shipping.
How is the readability of the "to be implemented" used in this sentence? A proofread company told me that it was grammatically correct, but it was not quite intuitive to read. Any suggestion or the usage here is just fine?
Here is another example I found online:
Poland new contract: KTC has been awarded the direct distribution service for the to be implemented satellite based (GNSS) ETC system.
Without understanding what "Wireless Presentation Getaway" is, a concrete answer cannot be provided, but the proof-reading company seems to be correct. Consider hyphenating the compound modifier (?) to make it more comprehensible.
[...] sealing the deals, settling the exclusive design architectures of the to-be-implemented [...]
Further reading:
Hyphens' main purpose is to glue words together. They notify the reader that two or more elements in a sentence are linked. Although there are rules and customs governing hyphens, there are also situations when writers must decide whether to add them for clarity.
Rule 1a. Generally, hyphenate two or more words when they come before a noun they modify and act as a single idea. This is called a compound adjective.
Examples:
- an off-campus apartment
- state-of-the-art design
https://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/hyphens.asp