Uses of "Thus" and "That" [closed]

Solution 1:

Thus is used in a correct context. But, I'd also suggest that you add a comma after Thus to make it grammatically correct. Also, I'm inferring that this is a CV you're preparing, so you better avoid making any grammatical mistakes as it looks bad on your part. I'd also recommend you to write it as than that instead of that and also avoid using the word every, as it creates a bad impression about you(Narcissistic, if I may say). I agree with @bitter dreggs, you need to remove the capitalized version of those verbs, it looks out of place in a CV. Cheers!