Please check grammar and structure! [closed]
The bar chart presents the number of male and female who did regular activity in Australia in 2010. The information,according six different age groups by gender,are illustrated in percentage.
Solution 1:
I think this is what you were trying to say. My edits are in caps:
The bar chart presents the number of maleS and femaleS who did regular activity in Australia in 2010. The information, CATEGORIZED according TO six different age groups by gender, is REPORTED (USE 'REPORTED' INSTEAD OF ILLUSTRATED?) in percentages.