Using Verbs With Inanimate Objects
I have two ways to write the same sentence:
- The writing sings.
- The writing is musical.
To me, the first sounds a lot better. It's better, I think, because I'm using a verb to describe what the writing is doing instead of an adjective to provide a more static description.
Is there a more formal term for what's going on here (i.e. using verbs to more-vividly describe inanimate objects?)
This is a matter of rhetoric and style.
When we have non-humans (like writing) doing things that humans do (like singing), we call it personification.
As you might imagine, humans—self-centered creatures that they are—find personification stimulating.
If that rhetorical device helps you connect with your audience, do feel free to deploy it in your writing.
Just don't overdo a good thing.