response on job acceptance [closed]
I want to open my mail with the following sentence:
It's great to hear that you have chosen me for the position!
But after talking with a friend he suggests that I should change the sentence to the following:
It's great that you have selected me for the position!
What would you guys suggest? If any more context is needed let me know so I can clarify.
Both of those convey the same idea, so I don't think one is better than the other.
I wonder if you really want to use the word "selected" or "chosen" though. When I look for a job, I see it as a mutual benefit - in exchange for some salary, they get my talents and work ethic. Of course the company needs to select/choose me from other candidates their applicant pool, but I wouldn't accept the job unless I thought I'd be happy doing it. It's only when our (the company and my) interests coincide that I take the job.
I don't mean to push my philosophies on you, I only mean to ask whether this is the message you want to send. If not, you might consider:
Great! I'm happy to receive your offer, as I also think this would be a good fit for me.