How would you correct the following sentences? [closed]

grammar sentence

How would you correct the following sentences.( Formal)

Thank you in advance.

"I’d like to schedule a day-trip to you company in order to meet with you and Ms. Jones for the interview possibly on Tuesday , Nov 28th, anytime after 2 PM or Monday, Dec 1st, between 10 AM to 11 AM."


Solution 1:

Because you’ve indicated that this is a formal contact, I’ve taken more liberty at rewriting your text (versus simply cleaning it up) to reflect that. Note the use of asterisk in lieu of a dash (to represent a bullet) as Stack Exchange is trying to interpret the dash as a marker for programming code. Also note that I speak American English. My version may be more direct than someone who speaks British English.

“I would like to schedule a day trip to visit your company and meet with you and Mrs. Jones. Would either of these dates and times work for an interview?

  • Tuesday, November 28th, anytime after 2 pm or
  • Monday, December 1st, between 10 am and 11 am.”

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