Is it correct to say "more apparent" [closed]

In my journal entries for my English class, I am trying to describe the relationship the man has with his son in The Road by Cormac McCarthy by saying that

...the man is terrified of losing his son, which is more apparent when he sees how thin the boy is."

Is this correct?


Solution 1:

apparent OED

Manifest to the understanding; evident, plain, clear, obvious; palpable.

As in:

"The man is terrified of losing his son, which is more apparent when he sees how thin the boy is." Is this correct?

Yes, this is grammatically correct.