Asking for feedback on a meeting summary

Solution 1:

What I don't like about your sentence is that it sounds a bit negative - as if you expected omissions or mistakes to be found.

A more positive way of communicating the same message would be something like:

Let me know if you have any questions or comments.

"Questions or comments" sounds more positive because these words do not necessarily relate to mistakes. It shows that you expect questions or feedback in general - positive or negative feedback.

Solution 2:

My standard phrase is:

If you have any questions or comments, just let me know.

Of course, that's a one-size-fits-all no-brainer, and comes off as such. But then again, I know that if I start thinking about it, I will start overthinking, and writing a simple three-sentence email will take forever.

That being said, I can certainly think of a few variations. For the first part of the sentence, I might write:

• If there are any omissions or mistakes,..
• If something's wrong or incomplete,..
• If you have any suggestions or corrections to make,..

And for the second part, I might write (depending on the level of formality):

• ... please do not hesitate to let me know.
• ... please let me know.
• ... just let me know.
• ... just drop me a note.