“The influence of ... on/upon ...”

As pointed out in the answers to the question you posted, the difference lies in the usage, not the meaning. "On" and "Upon" are both correct and would both be understood in the context you present.

The key difference is whether you want your sentence to feel more old-fashioned (and by extension, more formal). In the context of writing a paper about negatively charged particles, one might want to use "on" to prevent said paper from feeling too outdated.


The choice between on and upon in the sentence

We study the influence of anion size on/upon localisation

is not merely a matter of style. Two entirely different meanings are possible.

  1. With on:

    We study the influence of anion size on localisation

    This indicates an investigation into how localisation is affected by anion size.

  2. With upon:

    We study the influence of anion size upon localisation

    Although probably not sensible in this chemical context, this sentence could indicate an investigation into the effects or importance of anion size, once localisation has occurred.