How does one use multiple "by"s for nested descriptions?
The software peeps at our company make these neat reports for our business peeps. For example, we might have a report called "Sales by Day":
Sales by Day Report
Day Sales Monday $100.00 Tuesday $200.00 Wednesday $450.00 Thursday $250.00 Friday $120.00
Another report may be Sales by Store (for all time):
Sales by Store Report
Store Sales San Diego $10,000.00 Boston $30,000.00 Salt Lake City $25,000.00 Gotham $45,000.00
Now, if we wanted to show a breakdown per store mixed with per day, as in the following example, which title would be correct, and why?
Sales by Store by Day Report or Sales by Day by Store Report
San Diego
Day Sales Monday $20.00 Tuesday $25.00 Boston
Day Sales Monday $35.00 Tuesday $45.00 ....
Solution 1:
I would replace one of your by with per:
Sales by Day per Store
Sales per Day by Store
In this context by and per are effectively synonymous, so you can use either variant. However, for consistency's sake you should probably use per consistently in one half of the formula or the other, so that you always say (for example) Sales Per Day, whether or not the store breakdown is given.
Solution 2:
First, offset the "levels" with commas or parentheses:
Sales by Store (by Day)
or
Sales by Store, by Day
If you are asking about the order, I think the correct order would be innermost to outermost grouping, but I cannot cite any authority for that, just experience.
Sales by Day, by Store
Solution 3:
Looking at your two single-level examples (Sales by Day and Sales by Store), the Sales (numbers) appear on the right side, and the ordering qualifier appears to the left. So for consistency, I think I would continue that trend.
In your final example, sales are furthest to the right, then days, then stores - so I would title the report Sales by Day, by Store.
In all fairness, however, I could probably convince myself the other way too. As long as the labels of the qualifiers are clear, I don't think the title will lead to any confusion.
(edited to take @JeffSahol's excellent suggestion of offsetting by commas)
Solution 4:
Since the way you've grouped the data
It should say
Sales by Store by Day
or even better
Daily Sales by Store
Hope that helps!!!