Can I use "for which" here?
I'm writing a post, but none of below sentences sounds good to me.
This post is a record of the first five weeks that I've exercised in a gym.
or
This post is a record of the first five weeks for which I've exercised in a gym.
or
Is there any better suggestion?
Thanks in advance!
Solution 1:
"For which" does not seem good. It sounds as if you exercised because of the five weeks rather than during them.
Consider the following ways of saying what you want:
- "This post is a record of my first five weeks of working out at the gym"
- "This post is a record of the first five weeks that I've been exercising at a gym"
- "This post is a record of the first five weeks that I've exercised at a gym"
- "This post is a record of my first five weeks at the gym"