How these phrases can be simplified? [closed]
I often write technical texts and not being a native speaker I am facing difficulties to make introductory sentences (including this one) concise. I just scrolled through my manuscript and found these patterns repeat many times:
- The advantage here is that there are a number of reference results for ...
- What is even more appealing is that it can ...
- Unusual here is that this is ...
Can these intros be optimized somehow? Some extended example would be
Unusual here is that this is a matrix with small off-diagonal elements.
The lengthy phrases are adverbial and can be replaced by adverbs:
Advantageously, there are... ;
Moreover, it can ... ;
Unusually, this is ..
Try to use the principal nouns as your subjects.
Unusual here is that this is a matrix with small off-diagonal elements. --> This matrix is unusual in having small off-diagonal elements.
The advantage here is that there are a number of reference results for … --> This approach (option, ...) has the advantage of having a number of reference results for …
What is even more appealing is that it can … --> It has the even more appealing feature of ...