Does this sound correct: "Client's service is at risk of termination"? [closed]

Let's say I own a business and I provide some services. I have a client which has failed to make a payment, so his service might be terminated soon. I'm receiving an email about this situation as the owner.

Can the email subject be like: Client's service is at risk of termination? Does this message sound correct to you?

Solution 1:

Yes absolutely, I see nothing wrong with that!

Having said that, if you are sending this email directly to the client, perhaps it would be better to say:

Your service is at risk of termination

Otherwise, it sounds passive to refer to them in the third-person when you are addressing them directly.

Hope that helps you, let me know if you need clarification or I misunderstood your question.