Usage of neither/nor vs none
Which is the correct option between these two lines?
1) But none of your obnoxiousness or charm
2) But neither of your obnoxiousness nor charm
I'm writing a poem for somebody and am currently confused between the two choices. English is obviously not my native language so any help would be greatly appreciated.
Solution 1:
The first suggestion is fine:
1) But none of your obnoxiousness or charm
The second example needs a bit of unpicking:
2) But neither of your...
excludes two similar features/ objects/ people. "Neither of your shoes is a good fit;" "Neither of your brothers are as clever as you."
It is better to leave out the 'or.'
2) But neither your obnoxiousness nor charm...
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