Is there a name for this literary device from James Baldwin and question about punctuation? [duplicate]

Solution 1:

Betwen Anaphora(repetition of the beginning of a sentence) and Epistrophe(repetition of the end of a sentence), consider Anadiplosis (and of course "mesodisplosis" proposed by @StoneyB),

Anadiplosis ("doubling back") the rhetorical repetition of one or several words; specifically, repetition of a word that ends one clause at the beginning of the next.

Men in great place are thrice servants: servants of the sovereign or state; servants of fame; and servants of business. Francis Bacon

Anaphora and Epistrophe: Two Rhetorical Devices You See Everywhere