A word/phrase describing the sound of leaves?
I have been describing a forest scene and there are only so many times I can use a form of the word Rustling.
Is there a word or phrase that can be used in place of this (It doesn't have to fit perfectly into place with rustles/rustling/rustled).
Any word or phrase that can describe the sound of:
- Something moving through leaves
- Leaves interacting with each other physically
Consider this lovely word, with its onomatopoeiac sibilance
susurrate, meaning to rustle, murmur or whisper
from the Latin susurrus for whisper.
From The Decline and Fall of the British Empire by Piers Brendon:
Especially alluring were the millions of date palms, with diamond-shaped striations on their trunks, golden clusters of fruit and an emerald whorl of fronds sussurating [sic] in the breeze.
You don't have to only use synonyms for this, you can use unique metaphors or creative descriptions to get your point across. You can incite thought without directly describing it. For example, this can suggest the sound of leaves:
The [wind] brought the forest to life.
Or
The leaves were like a whispering audience.
Or
The leaves sang a melody of comfort for those passing through the forest.
You could come up with unlimited creative descriptions for the sounds of rustling in a forest. I'm sure your readers would actually prefer to discover the sound instead of being told so straightforwardly and blandly what it is. Of course there is the time for that but painting a picture is almost always more interesting and beautiful.
You can also find unique words that aren't necessarily synonyms of "rustling" to graft in emotions or moods, like this for a frightening scenario:
The horror of the situation was only heightened by the lonesome sound of the leaves scratching and scraping one another.
Or for a pleasant scenario:
The leaves hummed and feathered as the women shuffled through the bright forest.
We tend to hear things very differently depending on how we feel in a given situation. Describing your sounds like this can increase the drama and enhance the mood.
The word psithurism means "the sound of wind in trees or rustling leaves" (not exactly what you were looking for).
https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/psithurism
http://www.thefreedictionary.com/psithurism
to crackle can be used referring to leaves, especially dry leaves:
- to make slight, sudden, sharp noises, rapidly repeated.
The Free Dictionary
Ngram: leaves crackling - You Tube the sound of crackling leaves.
- I hear the leaves crackling under my feet as I trudge through the yard. I hear children yelling as they jump...